First off, nice song, I liked this. Now for some critique. The mix sounds like it could use some work, as it gets muddled every now and again, especially when you use reverb. Also I felt some of the synth sounds you used could have been more fitting with the other synths. Some of them just sound a bit out of place. And the last thing is that you should add some variation to some of the background melodies. You have an arpeggio going from low to high for most of the song, it makes it a bit repetitive. Other than that great job.
Thank you for the long review! some of the synths sounded a bit out of place i agree with that, but next time ill try to make better as i can, thank you again!
Just stumbled onto this. I love this. It's an amazing level of atmosphere. Whatever creative energy you channeled here was great. Goosebumps.
It's not drum and bass, and it's not that bad, good job.
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